Chapters

Question: How do you recommend dividing a novel into chapters? I'm trying to figure out how long my chapters should be, if they should revolve around a single scene, if my scenes have enough content to become a chapter, etc. Thanks!

Answer: I generally recommend placing chapter breaks after an event has reached its resolution and given the characters a new purpose that will propel them towards the next event. However, chapters can contain more than one event, if the events are brief.

The word scene is a little vague, since scenes can contain more than one event. You could, for instance, have an entire full-length story that consists of a single scene (though this is rare), but it will contain many events.

Of course, you don't want chapters to be too long either. A chapter should also be a good length for the reader to read in half an hour or less (so they can tell themselves, "I'll just read one more chapter before bed."). For adults, 5,000 words is not a bad limit. Naturally, chapters must be shorter in children's books. However, even adult novels will occasionally have a very short chapter, if that's what the story's needs dictate.

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by Bryanna
(california)

Question: What if a chapter feels rushed?

Answer: Your feelings should be a pretty good guide, though you can also ask others for a second, objective opinion.

If you feel the chapter is rushed, then perhaps you have to look at what you may be glossing over. The more important the event or events the chapter depicts, the more detail may be needed to convey its importance.

You could ask yourself questions such as...

* Would it add to the emotional push and pull to break a single, big event into a sequence of smaller events, creating a dramatic arc such as inciting event --> complication/conflict --> crisis/turning point --> resolution?

* Would it help to include other characters reactions to what is happening?

* Do you need to describe the action in more detail? Perhaps replace generalities with a more specific description.

* Have you included your POV character's reactions in terms of thoughts and feelings along with the action?

* Remember that, in addition to having your reader appreciate progress in your plot, you also want them to appreciate progress in your characters' relationships and inner conflicts. They need to know why an event is important - what it means and to whom it is meaningful.

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by alistair ashton
(huddersfield)

Question: I was wondering when writing my book what should every chapter in my book contain

Answer: Try thinking not so much about what each chapter should contain but where to put chapter breaks in the novel. Some writers write the entire story first and add the chapter breaks afterward.

That said, generally each chapter should contain one complete an event in the story (an event being an important change). You can have more than one event in a chapter, if the events are told in not too many pages. You want to put chapter breaks in places where you have a sense that one event has finished and the reader is now looking forward to what will happen next.

That "looking forward" is what will compel the reader to turn to the next chapter rather than put the book down.

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by Tracy Porter
(Iowa)

Question: I stumbled upon your web site and have found it extremely informative!! Thank you!!

I'm a beginner writer who has finished (rough draft) a fantasy trilogy. If each book is roughly 80,000 words, does someone have advice on how many chapters it should contain?

The books were typed in Microsoft Word so how many pages would you expect to be in one chapter?

Thank you anyone with advice/tips. I can't seem to find info on this topic.

Answer: You can't count on your word processor to give you the best word count for your manuscript, but if you are following the standard format (see this article... https://www.how-to-write-a-book-now.com/manuscript-format.html) you should have roughly 250 words per manuscript page.

How many pages that becomes in the printed book depends a lot on the book designer's choice of font, margin, headers, etc.

There is no set rule about chapter length. It depends to some extent on your writing style and how frequent the natural breaks arise in your story. Some guidelines...

* A chapter break should fall at a point where one event has been resolved in a way that leaves the reader wondering what will happen next as a result of what just happened (so they will want to read the next chapter).

* Like a short story, a chapter should be of a length that a person can read comfortably in one sitting.

* Bearing the above in mind, chapters will be shorter with children's and young adult books, especially ones written for reluctant readers.

* If you are uncertain about your readers, you can pick up some bestselling books in your genre and count the words in an average chapter. That will at least give you a sense of their expectations.

Finally, not all chapters need to be the same length. It depends on the story. So don't get too hung up on it.